In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outwigh the disadvantages?

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The advent of technology has brought numerous effects whether positive or negative into each facet of human lives

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as a cutting-edge transportation mode. In the future years, all vehicles are projected to have automatic drivers which replace human-operated tasks. From my standpoint,

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cause a negative effect, I advocate that more merits can stem from

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the drawbacks. Regarding the disadvantages, people contend that driveless

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harmful causing accidents and

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in machine usings.

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can be seen from a recent trial by an innovative company in autopilot

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in America,

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Technology Innovation Report.

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, a scarcity of driver

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may increase, precipitating a massive unemployed population, since the

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, many advantages could be acquired from the state-of-the-art vehicles.

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personal driving since that has been designed to be automatic.

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, individuals could keep calm and relax in the meantime after setting a destination.

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about the company, can do a virtual conference

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, people would not get lost if they

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an autopilot driver as that vehicles have been set to read a map and go to

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in the Brain Communication Journal. In conclusion,

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an automatic vehicle could cause some detrimental effects, both environmental and social aspects, a lot of positive impacts stem from

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caused by advanced technology including modern transportation modes.

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Ensure a clear and consistent progression of ideas throughout the essay. Transition smoothly between points and maintain a logical structure.

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Clearly state your position throughout the essay, not just in the conclusion. Expand on main points with specific, relevant examples to support your argument.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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