The table below shows the number of visitors to ashdown museum before and after being refurbished

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of

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to Ashdown Museum during the years after and the year before it was modernized. After the

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the charts that show the

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of surveys asking people how satisfied they were with their visit

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, during the same two periods. It is obvious that the number of

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significantly increased after the

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from 74000 before the reconstruction to 92000 after it had been done. Now let’s look at the charts. The year before

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shows a negative pattern: the results of

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illustrate that only 15% of

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were very satisfied and the number of dissatisfied people was 40%. The year after

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illustrates that the number of dissatisfied

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declined and became 15%, on

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contrary, people who were satisfied increased to 35%. Comparing the

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of satisfied

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we can

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see an upward trend (it increased from 30% to 40% after the

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).

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, we can say that all

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that has been done to attract new

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to Ashdown Museum has reached its aim.