the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
This
graph illustrates that the bookstore has been developed since 2000. Overall
, a lot of facilities are built nowadays, while
some rooms were eliminated and replaced. On the other hand
, several areas have remained in this
period.
First of all, Fiction in the north of the bookstore is four times smaller than before because it was divided into four parts equally. At present, another three parts are acquired by Art, Hobbies, and Cookery. Meanwhile,there are three tables and several chairs are
installed in the Unnecessary verb
apply
center
of the bookstore, which is the original place of these facilities.
Change the spelling
centre
In addition
, it can be observed that Non-Fiction was moved from the south area to the east north
corner and replaced Add a hyphen
east-north
another
Fiction in these 23 years, Correct quantifier usage
apply
while
Cafe
Correct article usage
the Cafe
is
built in the original space of Non-fiction. Wrong verb form
was
On the contrary
, Travel, New Books, Service Desk, and Entrance were
not changed between 2000 and now.Verb problem
have
Submitted by J.C.Li.1997.11 on
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