the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
The map displays developments, which took place in the
book store
between 2000 and now.
In Correct your spelling
bookstore
bookstore
in 2000 Correct article usage
the bookstore
was
two Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
section
Change to a plural noun
sections
of
Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
Fiction
Add an article
the Fiction
section
. But now there is no Use synonyms
Fiction
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section
. Use synonyms
Fiction
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section
's first Use synonyms
section
had changed to art, hobbies, cookery, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
fiction
sections and Correct word choice
and fiction
second
Add an article
the second
a second
section
of Use synonyms
Fiction
had changed to Use synonyms
non-
Correct article usage
the non-fiction
fiction
Use synonyms
section
, meanwhile Use synonyms
section
Use synonyms
as
Change preposition
of
Correct article usage
the servise
servise
desk, travel, Correct your spelling
service
new
books did not change at all. They replaced art, hobbies, Correct word choice
and new
cookery
Correct word choice
and cookery
Use synonyms
section
Fix the agreement mistake
sections
to
the tables. That means they needed more Change preposition
on
place
to sit and read. The Fix the agreement mistake
places
visitosr
needed Correct your spelling
visitors
visitor
place
to have their lunchAdd an article
a place
at
.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, there are 4 sections that had changed,Linking Words
meanwhile
3 sections like travel,new books and service desk did not changes at all. As we can see the bookstore Add a comma
meanwhile,
had
totally changed since 2000, we can notice how Wrong verb form
has
visitors
Change noun form
visitors'
visitor's
preferens
Correct your spelling
preferences
had
changed Wrong verb form
have
during
2000 and now.Change preposition
between
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words section, fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 6 times.
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