You recently completed a course and youu borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful wa the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

Dear Sir, Very Good morning. I want to express my
apologise
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in
this
letter because I was unable to return the book that I borrowed from you
last
week.
Firstly
, It was my pleasure, and I am very thankful to you for giving me the opportunity to explore
this
book and get
such
mathematical methods that will really help me a lot to achieve the desired score in
to
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the exams.
Moreover
, I loved
this
because it is easy to read.
Furthermore
, I am really sorry because I disappointed you.
As well as
I promised you to return
this
on time but
due to
my sickness, I am not able to come on time.
However
, I am coming on Monday to give you. I hope you forgive me for the same, and our trust will not be destroyed. Thanking You, Yours Obediently, Amit
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea or point.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of linking words to create better cohesion and enhance the flow of your writing.
task achievement
Always address all parts of the task. In this case, you did not sufficiently detail the reasons why you found the book helpful.
task achievement
Avoid contractions and maintain a more formal tone throughout your letter to align with the expected IELTS writing style.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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