The line graph depicts how many
computers
were sold in the three computer stores in Ho Chi Minh City from 2000 to 2005.
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not enough goods, but after nearly three and half years soared their selling and became the most computer seller Use synonyms
store
in the city.
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store
has the highest rate of selling Use synonyms
computers
among those two stores with 8,000 Use synonyms
computers
in 2000. But after a single year Computer Plus Use synonyms
store
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up until 2002. By declining to 4,000 sales in 2003, the Laptop World Use synonyms
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earned the highest market share between these three companies reaching 14,000 sales in just 5 years.Use synonyms