The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates a comparison of how many millions of tourists visited a specific Caribbean
island
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by staying on cruise ships on the
island
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during the 7 years of the period from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the visitor numbers had a gradual increase in total. The
number
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of travellers, who were accommodated on the
island
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,
were
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was
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750.000 people in 2010, and
this
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number
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fluctuated in 2011. Between 2011 and 2013, the
number
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of visitors doubled, afterwards, it flattened out until 2015. In 2016, the
number
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experienced a decrease by half of a million compared to the previous year.
At the end
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of
this
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7-year period, tourists who were staying on the
island
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were one to two compared to the beginning. The other visitors who preferred cruise ships were 250.000 in 2010, and had an upward trend to 500.000.
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, the visitor numbers experienced a decrease from one to two. Between the years 2012 to 2017, the numbers steadily surged to 2 million people.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • steady increase
  • peak
  • stabilization
  • notable change
  • market saturation
  • seasonal variations
  • tourism infrastructure
  • external factors
  • global economic conditions
  • persistent popularity
  • demand patterns
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