The diagram illustrates the process of producing bricks from clay for the building industry.
The diagram shows how
bricks
are made from clay for the building industry.They are are 7 stages that are also
shown.
Firstly
, clay is dug from the ground with a big machine called a digger.After that, it passes through the roller and metal grid and on the metal grid it is sieved to remove some impurities before the next process.Additionaly
, to make the clay good for the next stage a mixture of sand and water is added so that it will form a strong mixture.
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Additionally
Thirdly
,after combining the mixture it is put into a wire cutter so as to produce bricks
with a similar shape.After bricks
are moulded they are placed into the drying oven for about 24 to 48 hours the reason for this
is to remove water.Moreover
, the bricks
are transferred to the klin which has moderate temperature.Then
after that they are moved to the next klin with the highest temperature.
Next,
it is the cooling chamber where bricks
are allowed to dry for 48 to 72 hours before they are packed and
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lastly
after packing the bricks
are loaded and they enroute for delivery.Submitted by karigaruvimbo on
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