the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.

the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
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The maps below illustrate some advancements that occurred from 2000 till date.
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,in both maps the position of the Entrance did not change
also
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the Service Desk and New Books
as well as
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Travel did not develop into new features. In 2000 there was
a
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fiction
in
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the top but currently, the map shows that
the
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fiction was converted into three new different sections which are Art and Hobbies
as well as
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Cookery.
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, neither Travel nor New books changed their position in both maps.
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,the Non-fiction shown in 2000 was later developed into a Cafe on the current plan but, the Fiction in the upper corner of the map of 2000 was later reconstructed into
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Non-fictionfiction.The tables were added in the place that used to have Cookery and other facilities.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • changes
  • occurred
  • transformations
  • developments
  • span
  • visual
  • comparison
  • illustrates
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