the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
The maps below illustrate some advancements that occurred from 2000 till date.
Overall
,in both maps the position of the Entrance did not change also
the Service Desk and New Books as well as
Travel did not develop into new features.
In 2000 there was a
fiction Correct article usage
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in
the top but currently, the map shows that Change preposition
at
the
fiction was converted into three new different sections which are Art and Hobbies Correct article usage
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as well as
Cookery.Moreover
, neither Travel nor New books changed their position in both maps.
Furthermore
,the Non-fiction shown in 2000 was later developed into a Cafe on the current plan but, the Fiction in the upper corner of the map of 2000 was later reconstructed into a
Non-fictionfiction.The tables were added in the place that used to have Cookery and other facilities.Correct article usage
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