In the future,nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the future,nobody will
parchase
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purchase
printed newspapers or
reading
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books because they will be capable
to read
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of reading
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most of the things
what
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that
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they want
from
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online.
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they believe that they
no
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need to pay for these.I Completely agree
of
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this
statement. On the one hand,
now a days
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nowadays
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world becoming more digital
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past decade.From online people get different
kind
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of information and many
others
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daily basis important things.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure to use a range of sentence structures to demonstrate language flexibility and to make your writing more coherent.
coherence cohesion
Correct recurrent grammatical errors and use punctuation appropriately to improve the readability of your response.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to connect ideas effectively and to improve the logical flow of your essay.
task achievement
Clearly state your opinion in the introduction and support it with relevant reasons and examples throughout the essay.
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Develop your ideas fully to meet the required task response. This includes writing a conclusion to summarize your points and reiterate your stance.
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Be sure to address the prompt fully, by exploring both sides if it's a discussion essay, or explaining why you agree or disagree if it's an opinion essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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