The chart below give information about level of education in Glasgow,a city in Scotland, in 2010.
The charts indicate five aged-groups female and male citizens of three educational levels in Glasgow in 2010.
Overall
, the bar chart
depicts the highest percentage
of 24-35 ages of respondents who studied university degree, whereas
75 or above was the lowest percentage
with no qualifications. However
, the pie chart
reports the highest proportion
of men who studied at universities, while
the lowest proportion
of women who joined post-secondary educational institutions.
To begin
with, from the bar chart
, the largest percentage
of those 24-35 ages of respondents who learned from universities, at 76%, whereas
the 75 or above ages of the lowest percentage
, who did not have any qualifications, at 72%, it was less than 4% the largest one in 2010.
On the other hand
, the pie chart
reports the highest proportion
of men who studied at universities, at 32%, while
the lowest proportion
of women who joined post-secondary educational institutions, at 29%, women were less just only 3% than highest one in the same year.Submitted by jimmy.wong.wp on
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