WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The provided line graph illustrates the trends of sports among the people taking part from certain areas during the period from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
, the line diagram indicates the substantial growth in the reason why the individual is interested in tennis
. At the beginning of the period, the most considerable area was rugby, but it shows reverse
pattern Correct article usage
a reverse
at the end
.
In 1985, the residents who play
rugby Wrong verb form
played
show
high attraction around 240. The starting of Wrong verb form
showed
tennis
and football was 150 and around 80, respectively. However
, badminton players accounted for the lowest approximately 55, and at the end
merely dipped to exactly 50, in 2005.
Further
, In 2005, the rugby sports pattern showed a dramatic decline, reaching the same value as the data on tennis
players in 1995. Where tennis
interested participants go up between 20 years of span around 230. Additionally
, basketball and badminton illustrate almost parallel formate in the middle of two decades.Submitted by shubhashish.bobby on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tennis with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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