The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie charts are divided into four categories breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snacks. The charts compare the average percentage of
Sodium
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, Saturated fat, and Added
sugar
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in each ordinary meal in the USA. At first glance, the
Sodium
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and saturated fat in dinner meals are more than other meals
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the rate of
sugar
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is far more than other nutrients in snacks. All substances have low and equal figures for breakfast. It can be seen that Snacks dramatically contain
sugar
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at a little over 40%
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the figures for other nutrients are 14% and 21%. Meals that are consumed at night have the highest proportion of
sodium
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and saturated fat at around
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, and a little under 40% respectively. The percentage of all three continents
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approximately equal in breakfast at 16%.
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,
sodium
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and saturated fat in lunch have the same figures at 29% and 26%.
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contrast
this
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rate for added
sugar
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is 19%.
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