The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The picture details the several steps and some devices to produce adhesive and after that, the manufacture of concrete from produced mud.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that development adhesive is used in almost five stages and in the later step, the produced adhesive is a mixture of some ingredients for the manufacture of adhesive.
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To begin
with, limestone and clay are put on the surface screens to become powder through the crusher. After that, they transferred to the mixture for mixing together. In the next stage, Linking Words
while
fire flows into the rotating heater, the mixed material is passed on and poured onto the flat screen. Ingredients are passed into the grinder and become adhesive. Linking Words
Finally
, the produced adhesive is packaged.
As can be seen, in the next step, to construct concrete, produced adhesive with some additional materials, Linking Words
such
as water, sand, and gravel, are mixed with appropriate amounts in the Concrete mixer, with 15%, 10%, 25%, and 50%, respectively.Linking Words
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