The graph below gives information about the percantage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosans ehere relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percantage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosans ehere relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the rate of four different countries' populations in Asia between the
years
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1970 and 2020, with predictions from 2030 to 2040.
Overall
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, the Population in Asian communities has increased every year except in the Philippines. From 1970 to 2020 Malaysia and Indonesia became more crowded than the other two nations. In the next 20
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, the community trend will be upward. In 1970, the people percentage for Indonesia and Thailand was between 10 and 20 per
cent
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, increment in society numbers showed a steady rise until 2000. But the following year it became almost double
at the end
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of 2020. On the other side, Thailand's society rose slightly just over 30 per
cent
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. In the next 20
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, the proportion of the population of these two countries will reach nearly 50 per
cent
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. Other nations which the Philipines and Malaysia populousness were 30 percent in 1970.
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, Malaysian crowd numbers showed a sharp rise of more than double around 75 per
cent
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by 2020. The highest population belonged to Malaysia and in the following
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will have increased to over 85 per
cent
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.
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, These countries' populousness will keep rising in the next 20
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and
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, will reach the highest amount next two decades.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • percentage
  • trend
  • prediction
  • increase
  • decrease
  • urbanization
  • decade
  • significant
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • plateau
  • demographics
  • forecast
  • socio-economic factors
  • metropolitan
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • infrastructure
  • developing country
  • industrialization
  • sustainable growth
  • census
  • statistical data
  • projection
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