The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The diagram shows how apple is canned.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
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The diagram illustrates the stages in the process of packaging
apple
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cans
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.
Overall
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, high-quality
Apple
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cans
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need to go through 14 steps before being delivered to customers. First of all,
apples
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should be picked by farmers' hands and transported to factories by trucks. In the factories,
apples
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will go through several different standardized procedures respectively, in the order are washing, checking each
apple
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's quality, storing in freezers, checking weights and giving scores to every
apple
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. Those processes could make sure every piece of
apple
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in
cans
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corresponds to the factory's standards and the government's policies. After those cleaning and confirming steps,
apples
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will be sent to a place where can slice
apples
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into small shapes to make sure each of the slices can be perfectly put in the
cans
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. Afterwards, the
cans
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that have
apples
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inside will be sealed.
Next,
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all the
cans
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before shipping are required to boil in hot water in order to kill all the bacteria inside the bottle. The
last
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stage in the industry is labelling, which highlights the brand name and nutrition content of
apple
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canes, and following that all complete
apple
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cans
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will be stored in the storage rooms until the appropriate time to dispatch and transport to consumers.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words apple, cans, apples with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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