Some people prefer to directly help or support people who need it in the local community. However, others prefer to give money to the national or international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give your opinion.

Throughout

the

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history, ways of giving charity are still debatable. Half of the society

tend

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to hand the

support

directly to the ones who need it or to the

community

that is

related,

while

others prefer to count on national or international charities.

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both

perspectvies

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perspectives

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the illustrations

as well as

my opinion. On the one hand, many people are already awake of

volunteerily

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volunteer

voluntarily

work as the result the result itself can be seen instantly

despites

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the lack of resources.

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support

can be versatile

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on what

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community

asked

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for.

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, many

of

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citizens facilitate

a

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help to the local orphanages nearby with clothes, books, and even food. From what I see,

this

type of

assist

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will be beneficial as humans not only serve and make an impact

to

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their society

,

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but

also

can sustain a social responsibility and build

the

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community

ties with fellow individuals.

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,

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the goverment-based

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goverment-based

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government-based

financial donation sector will make an inclusive society as they will distribute the

helps

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in

wider

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range. More than that, the impacts will be

also

greater since the funding will be handled by a professional expert in an

economical

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area.

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,

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a country

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country

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a country

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like Indonesia once helped Congo

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in

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an

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international cooperation to solve the hunger issue in that country. I

support

this

motion as

this

kind of

support

help

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any

levels

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of humans in

comprehensive

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way.

However

, the

transparacy

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transparency

of

this

action is not as visible as in the

non-goverment

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non-government

organizations.

To sum up

,

whereas

many people opt to do

a

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volunteer work or directly help the others through local

community

, others believe that fundraising

that

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is held by trustworthy or legal

institution

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institutions

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like national or even international charities. More than that, I

also

believe that both sides are efficient

to help

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those who are

needed

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.