In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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a

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of renting it in a number of countries. What I strongly believe is

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situation may be because of economic reasons and it may cause both positive and negative

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essay, I will explain my thoughts about

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subject. First of all, I would like to start with why would humans want

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a place and not

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one. From my

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, the biggest reason is their government's

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. In some countries, their fiscal is not

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and because of the inflation, it fluctuates all the time.

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makes citizens

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make

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for their future. Now, I want you to imagine an investment tool which can

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allow you to use it at the same time. Of

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buying a

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is the best option for it.

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, they are able to live

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own property

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they are making

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from it.

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, I would like to give an example from my father. He bought 2

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house

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in order to gain profit and we live in one of the houses.

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, from my point of view, I am inclined to believe that

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it provides a good impact on

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of governments,

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, because of the desire to buy a

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, the number of houses may inclined to decrease and it is possibly going to lead to raise prices for properties.

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, in the country where I live, the prices are increased and

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made

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to buy one. What I mean is it has both pros and cons. In a nutshell, all in all, it seems to me that because of finance,

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the number of owning a home increasing,

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makes

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both in positive and negative ways.