The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar chart illustrates different transport modes
such
as bus, car
, bike and foot that have been used for working and travelling in a city in Europe from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, the proportion of car
was the largest in 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
while
the lowest one was also
car
in 1960. Correct article usage
the car
Other kind
of transport shows big differences.
It can be seen that more than 30% of people chose Change the wording
Another kind
Other kinds
going
to work Change the verb form
to go
by
foot Change preposition
on
while
fewer citizens used car
which was less than 10% in 1960. Buses and bikes have no big differences only around 8%. Correct article usage
a car
Besides
this
, in 1980, more than one-quarter of people were going out by car
which was the most picked transportation whereas
a share of walking was not show
Change the verb form
was not shown
competion
to other transport.
In 2000, riding Correct your spelling
competition
with
Change preposition
by
car
had the biggest percentage which was 36%, Add an article
the car
a car
this
is similar to travel
by walking in 1960. The second place is bus Wrong verb form
travelling
then
bikes and foot show similar patterns, only less than 10% difference.Submitted by ieltswriting91 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
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