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The table shows the annual milk production in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala) in 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The table shows the annual milk production in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala) in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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The graph indicates how much milk was produced within a year in four different regions including
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, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala in three separate years, 1990,2000 and 2010.
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, it is explicit that
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 was the first rank in all three years.
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, in 2010, the mentioned countries all together produced more milk in comparison with the past. Focusing on the details of
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 and Australia, what stands out from the scheme is that they had almost identical statistics in 1990 and 2000. In more detail, the former accounted for 11,262,000 and 11,155,000 litres,
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 the latter with a minor difference produced 11,246,000 and 11,105,000 in 1990 and 2000 respectively.
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, the information of both faced a decline in 2010, the Australia’s production was roughly 2,000,000 less than the Netherlands’s. Returning to the figures
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 Tanzania and Guatemala, it can be seen that Guatemala ranked lowest with only 26,000 litres in 1999;
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 it reached 84,000 in the final stage, it remained
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the smallest producer.
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, Tanzania grew from an initial amount of 87,000 by around 1,000,000 to produce 1,42,000 milk in 2000, demonstrating a noticeable increase.
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, it produced a bit more in 2010, 1,55,000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dairy industry
  • agricultural practices
  • annual yield
  • milk production
  • upward/downward trend
  • production capacity
  • economic factors
  • technological advances
  • climate change
  • sustainable practices
  • global market
  • production quotas
  • livestock management
  • industrialization of dairy farming
  • organic farming
  • policy changes
  • agricultural subsidies
  • trade agreements
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