The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
This
chart shows the average number of hours
spent each day
by Chinese
, American, Turkish
, and Brazilian
tourists
on holiday leisure
activities in Greece in August 2019. Generally, we can see that both
Chinese
and American tourists
spend most of their leisure
time
reading books
, while
both
Turkish
and Brazilian
visitor enjoy their time
at the beach. In contrast
, visiting places is something that the tourists
are not really interested in, having the lowest number of hours
spent on each group.
As I said before, both
Chinese
and American tourists
spend quite a lot of time
reading books
in their leisure
time
. However
, it shows that Chinese
tourists
spent a longer amount of time
reading books
with a third duration of their day
spent compared to the Americans. Both
of the groups have the same pattern of interest in other leisure
activities because the next activities that are sorted by the average number of hours
spent are both
enjoying the beach and then
visiting places.
On the other hand
, both
Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
were spending much longer of their time
on the beach. The graph shows that the Brazilian
spent about 6 hours
of their time
doing so, while
the Turkish
spent around 5 hours
a day
. Both
of the groups have the same amount of time
on reading books
which is 4 hours
a day
, with an hour difference on spending their time
on visiting places.Submitted by mayfa.shadrina on
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