The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates
that
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apply
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three different categories of illegal crimes and the
amount
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number
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of cases committed from 1970 to 2005 in England and Wales.
Overall
,the graph apparent that car theft is the most increase illegal
cases
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case
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in England and Wales.
While house
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House
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burgling is the second illegal case.
Whereas
street robbery is steadily at first and slightly
rise
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rises
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at
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in
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the final
year
. From
1970s
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the 1970s
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, car theft
was
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apply
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started from 0.40
million
and significantly
rise
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rose
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to 1.00
million
in 1990 In the following
year
that
incresae
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increase
increased
to peak at 1.60 in 1995.
After
this
year
has gradually
reduce
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reduced
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to 1.20 in 2005 In
case
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the case
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of house burgling started from 0.20
million
in 1970 and up to
peak
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a peak
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at
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of
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0.70
million
in 1995.After that moderately
reduce
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reduced
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to 0.5
million
in 2005.
On the other hand
, street robbery
depict
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depicts
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that the
constantly
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constant
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from 0.1
million
in 1970 to 1990.
However
in the following next
year
that
increase
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increased
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to 0.20 in 2000.
Also
constantly to the 2005
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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