The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart above illustrates the preference of individuals from different age groups, 18-34, 35-54, and above 55 when moving to other countries. Notably, the activities were categorized into three different segments which are learning the local
language
, finding accommodation, and making friends.
Among people aged 18-34 years old, a substantial 46% indicated a preference for making local friends rather than the rest categories. While
the elderly group (55+) showed a strong inclination as much as 54% towards learning the local language
. In contrast
, the middle-aged group 35-54 years old, exhibited balanced tendencies across three activities with a percentage of 36% on making friends, 39% on finding somewhere to live, and 35% on learning the local language
. Thus
the most interesting part which is learning the local language
(will be their foundation communication), the younger group the less they interested
in it, and Add a missing verb
are interested
conversely
for the elderly.Submitted by aghnia.ulhaq on
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