A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at museum. Writing a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntery/unpaid work. In your letter . explain why you want to do voluntery/unpaid work at the museum . describe some skills and qualities you have that would be usful . give details of when you would be available for work

Dear
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or
madam
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Madam
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, I am writing
this
letter regarding
part-time
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a part-time
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unpaid job in
museum
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the museum
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which I read
in
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about in
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local
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the local
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newpaper
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newspaper
newspapers
. I am
intrested
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interested
to join
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that voluntary work and I am hoping you
would gave
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me that opportunity.
i
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I
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am really willing to do
voluntary
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a voluntary
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job because
this
is a great opportunity for me to learn great
skills
. In
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the musuem
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musuem
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museum
, I would
able
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be able
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to
intract
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interact
with new
individuls
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individuals
that would level up my communication
skills
as well as
my confidence.
Moreover
, I am able to get more knowledge about our
hometown
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history and can
get
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closely observe the
historic
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historical
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things. Regarding my
skills
, I have some computer
skills
and
really
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am really
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good
in communicate
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at communicating
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with visitors. I have
also
art knowledge which would give me
advantage
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an advantage
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during
job
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the job
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. I am available from upcoming
monday
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Monday
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in between working hours. I hope you will give me
this
chance to do unpaid
countribution
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contribution
contributions
. Your Faithfully, Jatin
Submitted by Jatinderjass.jj on

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Ensure you provide a comprehensive response to all three bullet points,
Use more complex sentence structures to improve coherence,
Keep a consistent and formal tone throughout the letter,
Sign off with 'Yours faithfully' when the recipient's name is unknown,
Avoid spelling and grammar mistakes for a more coherent response,
Divide the text into clear paragraphs, each containing a single, focused idea.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • voluntary work
  • unpaid contribution
  • enthusiastic applicant
  • community enrichment
  • cultural stewardship
  • keen interest
  • meticulous
  • articulate
  • team player
  • customer-oriented
  • education background
  • flexible schedule
  • availability
  • commitment
  • part-time engagement
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