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been

a

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topic

of

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discussion

for many years.

while

some

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people

think

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be more partial to

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different

type

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types

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of

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jobs than

what they are doing.

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essay will discuss and preference of the opinion. Those

who

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ae

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are

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believe in the same

of

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job

that

what

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they are attending and taking on their duty.

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an

opportunity

to answer the

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their

perfomance

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performance

and

individually

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results from their working in one

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on

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in

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their

life time

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.

Opportunity

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of career to get promote and increasing of

income

,

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organisation society is crucial to

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their employees to

saty

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stay

and be loyalty.

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,

benefitcial

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beneficial

of location and transportation were

fundermendal

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fundamental

to let people stay.

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, humanity

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the point on their

job

such

income

, location, transportation, and services from their organisation

includes

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wealfare

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welfare

.

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, I personally hold the view that through as

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changing

type of

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. Some people

are agreed

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to change their

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jobs

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for

an

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opportunity

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opportunities

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,

income

, and experiences. For the instancesuch as large companies and more development

of

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technologies, they have more resources to encourage their member as much as they can.

although

they contribute to offer more

income

and chances for their experiences.

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, working in the same

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job

in

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through

life time

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lifetime

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well-being individually

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beneficial

in perspectively.

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, changing

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jobs

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also

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crucial to

achieve

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experiences and

opportunity

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opportunities

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.

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from my point of

veiw

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view

, both topics have significant benefits as much as people working in their duty.