the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual inc9ome in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given bar graph illustrates the number of US households by their yearly salary between 2007 and 2015. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen all categories remained relatively stable despite few fluctuations, except for 100 thousand dollars or more.
The number of household
which had Change to a plural noun
households
minimum
Correct article usage
a minimum
$
50,000 and $75,000 income remained steady throughout the given period. The former stayed exactly at 20 Change preposition
of $
while
the latter centered roughly around 14 from 2007 to 2015.
On the contrary
, more apparent fluctuations were found on
the income Change preposition
in
Change preposition
of fewer
fewer
than $25,000 and in Correct quantifier usage
less
range
Add an article
the range
$
25,000 to $50,000. After moderately growing by 4 in 2011, the former Change preposition
of $
then
experienced a small fall to around 27 in 2015. Similarly
, the latter stood approximately at 26 in 2007 before hitting a peak to
30 in 2011. It Change preposition
at
then
slightly fell by 2 in 2015.
Lastly
, in spite of slight
Correct article usage
a slight
decreased
Replace the word
decrease
by
2 between 2007 and 2011, the $100,000 category Change preposition
of
then
experienced a dramatic raise
to just below 35 by the end of the given period.Correct your spelling
rise
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