The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year
The charts illustrate the total amount of donations for
the
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children in the USA with the types of fund distribution and
revenue
sources
in one
year
.
Overall
, the children's charity has a slightly higher
income
than the outcomes. The
revenue
sources
had been dominated by the donated food and much money was spent on the program services. The total
children
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charity received in one
year
is $53.561.580.
Furthermore
, the
Revenue
sources
dominated by the donation of food in a
year
was around 85,6%. The second highest from community contributions was 10,4% of the total.
Then
, 3% of the remaining
revenue
sources
were from program
revenue
, investment
income
, government grant and other
income
with 2,2%, 0.2%, 0.2%, and 0,4%, respectively. In the previous
year
, expenses were smaller than
income
, about $53. 224. 890. For the most
part
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money spent
for
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program services is around 95,8%.
Then
, just over 3% was used for fundraising (2%) and Management and general (1,6%)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising events
  • expenditure
  • administration costs
  • program expenses
  • direct benefits
  • indirect benefits
  • underprivileged children
  • education
  • healthcare
  • shelter
  • nourishment
  • medical treatments
  • basic needs
  • financial sustainability
  • transparency
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