The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The charts illustrate the comparison of different
ways
people in Canada and Australia obtain the news
. Overall
, Canadians were familiar with TV
to access the news
and most Australians chose to read news
online. In addition
, TV
and online sources
took the
first and second place in both countries.
Correct article usage
apply
According to
the bar chart, TV
in Canada was dominated by ways
of accessing news
at around 40%. It is slightly high at 4% with the online ways
about 36%. The third largest method to get news
was printed sources
at 14%. Then
, 10% of remaining
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the remaining
ways
are Radio and unknown with 7% and 3% respectively.
In Australia, just over half of people prefer to read news
by
online Change preposition
from
sources
. It was followed by TV
in second place at 37%. After that, people who enjoyed obtaining information from the printed news
were around 7%. Lastly
, the radio and unknown sources
, both share the same amount of 2%.Submitted by sintakristiani22 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ways, news, tv, sources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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