The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The presented pie charts and table provide a comprehensive overview of the
the
policy Remove the redundancy
apply
budget
for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. It is evident that for 2017 and 2018, National
Government were the primary source for Correct article usage
the National
budget
and the most expenditure of the Correct article usage
the budget
budget
come
Wrong verb form
came
to
Change preposition
from
salary
for officers and staff.
Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
Its
clear from the table that the highest amount of money Replace the word
It's
It is
earn come
slightly stable from Wrong verb form
earned comes
National
Government, during Correct article usage
the National
Correct determiner usage
a
that periods
Change the determiner
that period
those periods
for
175,5m Change preposition
of
at
2017 and 177,8m Change preposition
in
at
2018. Local taxes Change preposition
in
following as
Verb problem
are
second
source of Correct article usage
the second
budget
Add an article
the budget
a budget
that
has a significant development amount from 91.2m Correct pronoun usage
which
at
2017 Change preposition
in
then
Correct word choice
and then
increase
around 10 Wrong verb form
increased
point
by 102.3m. Change to a plural noun
points
However
, other sources took part as less than 15% from
the total sources.
Interestingly as Change preposition
of
showed
Wrong verb form
shown
at
the pie chart, how the Change preposition
in
budget
spent accounted significant
for salaries to officers and staff, Change the word
significantly
for
75% Change preposition
apply
at
2017 and 69% Change preposition
in
at
2018. Meanwhile, Change preposition
in
building’s
spending at the same amount for the Correct article usage
the building’s
periods
by 17%. Fix the agreement mistake
period
In contrast
, the least expenditure was only 8 % and 14%, respectively for Technology.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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