The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbian island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbian island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph displays the
number
of
visitors
in a specific Caribbean
Island
from 2010 to 2017 which were divided into
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
and those who were staying on the
island
.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that during the
period
given, the total
number
of people visiting Caribbean
Island
consistently increased except for the total
number
of
visitors
between 2015 and 2016. At the start of the
period
, the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
was greater than that of staying on
cruise
ships
.
However
,
at the end
of the
period
, the
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
surpassed those who were staying on the
island
. On the one hand, from 2010 to 2011, there were around 0.75
million
visitors
on the
island
before going up to just below 1,5
million
in 2012.
Furthermore
, between 2013 and 2015, the
number
remained stable at 1,5
million
before decreasing back to just below 1,5
million
. Eventually,
at the end
of the
period
, it rose again to exactly 1,5
million
visitors
.
On the other hand
,
although
starting the
period
with approximately 0,25
million
visitors
in 2010, the
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
was precisely 0,5
million
people in 2011. It
then
went down back to 0,25
million
people in 2012 before increasing gradually to 2
million
in 2017 which was 0,5
million
above that of staying on the
island
.
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