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The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
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The given line graph compares the
number
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 of visits to two
music
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 websites that were
Music
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Choice
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 and
Pop
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 Parade between
Day
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 1 and 15.
Overall
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,
Music
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Choice
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 was the predominant website during the surveyed period, except for Days 12 and 13. If we examine the graph deeply,
although
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 the
number
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 of
Pop
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 Parade viewers dropped dramatically from approximately 120,000 on
Day
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 3 to shy of 40,000 on
Day
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 9, it
finally
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 recovered in the next 2 days and reached its second highest of 150,000 people on
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 11.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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 of
Music
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Choice
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 visitors remained below 40,000 between
Day
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 4 and 11. After that, it witnessed a surge to nearly 120,000 individuals on
Day
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 12. From
Day
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 1 to 11, even though the
number
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 of
Music
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Choice
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 viewers was fewer than
Pop
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 Decade, the latter overtook the former to become the more popular one.
Lastly
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, on
day
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 15,
Pop
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 Decade visitors reached a peak of 170,000,
whereas
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 there was a significant fall in the
number
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 of
Music
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Choice
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 viewers, accounting for roughly half of the
Pop
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 Decade.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, music, choice, pop, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparison
  • Number of visits
  • Trends
  • Period
  • Increases
  • Decreases
  • Stability
  • Factors
  • Influenced
  • Marketing strategies
  • User interface
  • Variety of music
  • Peak times
  • Reasons
  • Promotional events
  • Long-term sustainability
  • Growth prospects
  • Graph
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