The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per persion in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line charts illustrate the average
emissions
per person in four distinct countries
from 1967 to 2007. Taking a comprehensive perspective, it is evident that the emission figures for two of the countries
exhibited an upward trend, whereas
the remaining countries
displayed a contrasting downward trend.
Commencing with the initial data collection period for carbon dioxide emissions
, the United Kingdom recorded the highest amount, exceeding 10 tons
in comparison to the other countries
, before gradually decreasing to 9 tons
. Subsequently
, Sweden reported account
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accounting
tons
in 1967. Over the following decade, it experienced an incline, reaching a peak of more than 10 tons
before concluding at 5 tons
.
Additionally
, the data revealed Italy's contribution to carbon dioxide emissions
, commencing at over 4 tons
. The pattern indicated an increase to 8 tons
in 1997, followed by a stabilization towards the end of the year. The carbon dioxide emissions
from Portugal commenced at approximately 2 tons
, with a discernible steady increase to 5 tons
per person by the conclusion of the period.Submitted by muhammad.alwan on
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