The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20

This

graph

shows the UK

air

pollution

source from 1990 until 2005.

Overall

of

this

graph

, the major cause of toxicity in the atmosphere came from industrial production, but it has been drastically decreasing in the past few

years

. The lowest pollutant source came from households and it has

been

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slowly decreased in the past few

years

.

this

graph

starting

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in 1990 and the majority of the

air

pollutant that came from industrial production

are

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is

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over five

millions

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million

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tons

but the sudden drop in the

graph

is in 1996 that since 1993 that has

been

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decreased up to three

millions

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million

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tons

of waste or around 35

percent

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per cent

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and slowly decreasing from 1999 until 2005.

In

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the start of the year

of

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apply

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1990

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the toxicity in the

air

from all

type

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types

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of transportation and household are starting exactly the same point at one

millions

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million

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tonnes and it

seem

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like the household has

produce

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produced

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less

air

pollution

in the past few

years

, unlike the transporting system

that

is slowly increase

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slowly increases

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the small amount of

pollution

pollution

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in the

air

. When all

has

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have

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combine

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combined

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it’s

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it

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seem

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that

the

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pollution

has significantly decreased in the area of

UK

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the UK

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, from the starting

the

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total of nine

tons

in 1990, and it decreased to four

tons

in 1999, and

start

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started

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to stay still later the

years

after.