many people think that to become a successful specialist, it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. Do you agree or disagree?

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To be successful in
life
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is to have a
well settled
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career
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. People who plan their
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career
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careers

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at
early
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age
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have achieved more in
life
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rather than the ones who have no
future
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plans. In
this
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eassy
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essay

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I will provide reasons for the agreement of having a planned
future
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and being
consistant
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consistent

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plays a vital role
to become
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successful. There are two reasons and the main reason is planning ahead helps you to pave
way
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the way

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for
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future
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the future

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. The choices made at
early
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age
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help us to gain more
knoledge
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knowledge

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in
the
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a

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particular field and
also
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ample amount of time to grow in the specific
career
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. It is
also
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published in a research paper that people at
young
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age
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are more
proned
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to involve themselves actively
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while
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apply

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compared to the ones who start at the later stages of
life
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. Growing up in
a
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apply

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particular needs more dedication and responsibilities.
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Consequently
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people in the latter stages have a pile of responsibilities to carry on.
For instance
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, after a certain
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age
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your health gives up and the dedication needed to start a new chapter in
life
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is far gone.
On the other hand
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, staying focused and
consistant
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consistent
consistency

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is the key to any success in
life
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. Change of plans frequently will hinder your
mind set
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mindset

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and cause a lot of
confusions
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confusion

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furthermore
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, affecting
the
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growth in
life
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. In
this
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mordern
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modern

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era, there is a wide range of scope in different sectors and as much as enormous opportunities simultaneously the competition has its peak growth. In order to achieve the
dream
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goal in
this
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competitive world one has to stay
persistant
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persistent

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in their choices and strive hard for
it
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.
For example
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, medicine is a vast sector and there is a variety of
specialization
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specializations

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with equal
competitions
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.
However
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, to get into a
dream
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specialization one should choose their
dream
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field during their MBBS period and start working. on thesis paper so by the time they complete their MBBS
period
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the next
future
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steps are planned
accordingly
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. In conclusion, planning early
as well as
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staying focused and
consistant
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consistent
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plays a major role in achieving the
dream
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career
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at a very early
age
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.
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Likewise
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a
future
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with no plans will end up a crooked road which does not reach the destination and makes
life
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very complicated.
Therefore
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, choosing a specific field and working hard towards it is what proves the passion towards your
dream
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goal.

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coherence cohesion
Be sure to organize your essay more logically, with clear paragraphs including an introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea and follow logically from one to the other.
task achievement
Work on developing your main points with specific and relevant examples. Avoid vague statements and try to show, not just tell, how planning and consistency lead to success.
language use
Review your work for grammatical errors and improve your range of vocabulary. Avoid repetitive sentence structures and incorporate complex grammatical constructions to enhance the quality of your writing.
task achievement
Ensure that you directly address the prompt in your introduction, develop your argument throughout the body paragraphs, and clearly summarize your stance in the conclusion. Your opinion should be clear throughout the essay.
coherence cohesion
Use cohesive devices appropriately to help the reader understand the relationship between ideas. However, do not overuse them, and make sure that they are used accurately to link sentences and paragraphs together.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Specialization
  • Skill development
  • Expertise
  • Proficiency
  • Competitive edge
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Adaptability
  • Industry changes
  • Burnout
  • Diverse skill set
  • Job satisfaction
  • Personal growth
  • Financial insecurity
  • Transferable skills
  • Lifelong learning
  • Mid-career shift
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