The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second cahrt shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the Australian household
energy
usage by various appliances Use synonyms
as well as
the Linking Words
gas
emissions in the conclusion to Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
energy
consumption.
Different proportions of many kinds of home gadgets which consume Use synonyms
energy
in Australian houses are mentioned in the diagram. Use synonyms
In addition
, the second figure demonstrates the chunks of greenhouse Linking Words
gas
released from these devices.
The heating gadgets use most of the Use synonyms
energy
about 42% of all other machines, Use synonyms
in contrast
, Linking Words
gas
emitted from heating appliances falls in Use synonyms
minority
. Correct article usage
the minority
Further
, cooling and lighting tools consume the least proportion of Linking Words
energy
but these release more gases Use synonyms
in
a result.
Change preposition
as
Moreover
, appliances Linking Words
such
as water heating consist of Linking Words
similar
amount almost a third in both Correct article usage
a similar
energy
usage and Use synonyms
gas
effusion. The freezers eject more Use synonyms
gas
as compared to Use synonyms
energy
which these machines utilise.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
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