The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second cahrt shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the Australian household
energy
usage by various appliances as well as
the gas
emissions in the conclusion to this
energy
consumption.
Different proportions of many kinds of home gadgets which consume energy
in Australian houses are mentioned in the diagram. In addition
, the second figure demonstrates the chunks of greenhouse gas
released from these devices.
The heating gadgets use most of the energy
about 42% of all other machines, in contrast
, gas
emitted from heating appliances falls in minority
. Correct article usage
the minority
Further
, cooling and lighting tools consume the least proportion of energy
but these release more gases in
a result.
Change preposition
as
Moreover
, appliances such
as water heating consist of similar
amount almost a third in both Correct article usage
a similar
energy
usage and gas
effusion. The freezers eject more gas
as compared to energy
which these machines utilise.Submitted by livelygirl127 on
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