The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph provides information about 3 different integration challenges faced
for
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by
people
who go live abroad. Three age groups were considered in this
analyses
.
Concerning the challenge related to learning Fix the agreement mistake
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local
language, more than half of Add an article
the local
population
over 55 years old suffered Correct article usage
the population
with
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from
this
aspect, which is represented by 54%. On the other hand
, 29% of young
population around 18-34 years old struggled with the learning process.
Other aspects observed in the graph were making friends and finding somewhere to live. Elder Add an article
the young
people
considerably suffered less the other groups. Just 22% them
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has
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have
suffered
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suffer
making
friends. Change preposition
from making
However
, 18-34 and 35-54 groups showed more than 36% facing these integration challenges.
Overall
, young people
had easiness learning
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easily learn
local
language when they move abroad, despite Add an article
a local
the local
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apply
hardship
in other aspects. Change preposition
in hardship
In contrast
to elderly people
, who had rough times speaking a new language.Submitted by carinabmurakami on
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