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the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarize the information and make a comparison. write 150 words.

the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarize the information and make a comparison. write 150 words.
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This
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 table depicts data about the three nations, which have the highest number of individuals.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the number of populations has increased since 2017 in these countries.
According to
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 what is shown,
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, the number of inhabitants in
China
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 is, 1.415 billion, which is slightly bigger than
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India
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in India
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, the rate of people increases in
India
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, at 1.11%, which is more than twice in
China
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.
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, the size of the land in
India
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 is, 2.973 million, which is less than a third of the area of
China
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,
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, the density of humankind per square kilometre in
India
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 is, 455, which is greater than
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twice in
China
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. Regarding the United States,
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 the count of citizens is, 327 million, which is considered minority in comparison to the other two countries, the figure of population elevation is higher than
China
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.
To sum up
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, we could say that, even though the populations in
China
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 and
India
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 are three times more than in the USA, the percentage of urban humans in the USA is significant compared to each of them.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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