The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the growth of
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per
years
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for three
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different
nations from a year of 2007 to 2010. The data
given
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by percentages.
Overall
, The
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of Ecuador has been
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fluctuating
. Despite
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that
Japan
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increased to the top point
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the end of time.
While
Tunisai was highest when started and dropped down
then
stable in the position.
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, from the information
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fluctuation in each country as
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the world was reflected.
To begin
with, Tunisia was on the top
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once starting at 6.3% in 2007 and
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to 4.5% in 2008. In the
last
of
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two years
for
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this
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not
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still stood
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at
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3% since their
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drooped.
On the other hand
,
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started at 2% in 2007, and
2008
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the
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was extremely rose to 4%
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even though
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every year, Japan
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increased to 5.2% in 2009 and there was
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standing
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the top point in 2009 at 6.5%,
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Ecuador
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was fluctuated, from the data that given huge
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is in 2009. Starting at 3% in 2007 and dramatically
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to 4.8%in 2008
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down to 2% in 2009, and
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out to
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2.25 in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Economic growth
  • Annual percentage increase
  • Fluctuation
  • Trend
  • Economic indicator
  • Comparison
  • Decrease
  • Increase
  • Stable
  • Unstable
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Recession
  • Recovery
  • Outperform
  • Underperform
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