More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
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be
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Expand on your examples to clearly correlate with the main points, adding depth to the argument.
Task Response
Maintain focus on the task throughout the essay, providing a balanced discussion on both viewpoints and a clear opinion.
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