You have your birthday next weekend and you are planning to organise a party where you will be inviting all your friends. Write a letter to invite your friend. In your letter, explain the occasion describe why you need your friend to come give directions to reach the venue

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Dear Sunny, How are you Old

charm

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Charm

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? I am writing

this

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letter to invite you

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my birthday party on January 20, 2024.

Moreover

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, as you know my special day is coming soon. I would like to organise a party where all my friends from schools and colleges are coming up. The party will be for 3 hours in a hotel named " Taza

khazana

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Khazana

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Firstly

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, snacks will be served by waiters and after

that

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that,

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we will cut the cake and

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dance

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bollywood

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Bollywood

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music.

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, I would like to get together because I'm migrating to Canada for higher studies. Before leaving there I would like to meet

all

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you all

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once.

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this

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, If you are wondering how to reach. I will share the location on

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therefore

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you can easily follow the map and

reach

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reach it

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. Hopefully, you will be on time. See you soon buddy. Yours lovingly, Gagan

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coherence cohesion

The letter should have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Maintain clear paragraphing with each paragraph focusing on a single aspect of the invitation.

coherence cohesion

Ensure the greeting and closing are formally consistent with the tone of a friendly letter.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph should bring out a new idea or point clearly without overlapping with another paragraph.

task achievement

Make sure to fully address all aspects of the prompt, providing detailed explanations for why the occasion is important, the specific need for the friend to come, and comprehensive directions to the venue.

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Maintain a suitable and consistent tone throughout the letter. While this letter has a friendly tone suitable for writing to a friend, ensure that it remains courteous and warm from the opening to the conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Milestone
Cherished
Indispensable
Jubilation
Navigating
Landmark
Cordial invitation
Festivities
Anticipate
RSVP
Commemorate
Ambiance
Gather
Revelry

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