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The map below gives information about a college at presentand its future view in 2020 after reconstruction.

The map below gives information about a college at presentand its future view in 2020 after reconstruction.
The two figures illustrate the construction of a college now and the remodelling
plan
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 for 2020.
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, the area of the whole college will not expand,
while
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 the arrangement inside the building will replan and the surrounding environment and facilities will improve and change. At present,
it is clear that
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 there are 5 parking lots on the left
side
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 of the main building and on the top of the map is a garden with many trees.
However
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, in the
plan
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 in 2015, the whole garden will be replaced by the expanded main building and the car parks will increase to 7. There is a footpath between the parking place and the education building, but it will be removed in the new
plan
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.
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, the entrance will be removed from the garden
side
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 to near the road, and beside the bus station, which will not alter the location. Looking at the information in the teaching building for more details, the reception will be put in the middle of the building, when people go through the entrance, they will see the reception area immediately. The number of classrooms will increase from 3 to 5 and in the new
plan
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 4 of them are on the right
side
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. On the left
side
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, in order from the map's top to bottom, there will be a shop, a lunch area, a classroom and a library. The shop will be the newly established one and the library will be moved from the right-bottom corner to the left-bottom corner. The toilet will be put behind the reception place which is contrary to now.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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