These days, adults tend to spend their leisure
time
to playChange the verb form
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computer
games
other activities. Actually, it is not
certainlyChange the word
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that as we claim,
this
brings advantages or disadvantages for adults.
Hence
, I will clarify both sides of
this
issue in
this
essay.
First of all, playing computer
games
still
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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some benefits
assistingChange preposition
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people in our lives. Almost
gamesCorrect determiner usage
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in the world nowadays, their subtitle
isCorrect your spelling
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international languages.
Hence
, it gets attention from players around the world and
this
makes
distanceAdd an article
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between users shorter.
For instance
, they can enjoy
thisCorrect determiner usage
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games
with someone that
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stranger, not only chatting but
also
talking
withChange preposition
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many
differenceReplace the word
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languages and thanks
forChange preposition
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it, we can
also
upgrade the language levels and make friends with more people
wholeCorrect article usage
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world.
Besides
, after working and studying
inChange preposition
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a long day, people can remove
stressfulReplace the word
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and
tiredReplace the word
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by playing
games
.
However
,
this
should not happen regularly on a basis, if the frequency of playing
games
cannot be controlled by the users, it will lead to some bad statuses.
First,
the players will be attempted by
games
and we will lack
of Remove the preposition
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focus.
Due to
in their minds, they just think about these and will find out some steps just to have much
time
for playing
games
. After that, they cannot concentrate on their studies and
worksCorrect subject-verb agreement
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with a hundred of their powers and their performances
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tend to be bad. Not only their results but
also
their
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, because they spend all
timeCorrect pronoun usage
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on Change preposition
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playing, so they do not have enough
time
to take care of themselves. It results in a lack of nutrition and causes many sicknesses.
In conclusion, every individual should manage their entertainment
time
efficiently, because any habit can have many impacts
involving Verb problem
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good or bad that
affectsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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on Change preposition
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our lives.