The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the change in the
number
of shops
that closed and opened in a country throughout the period
between 2011 and 2018.
The amounts of shops closure
went slightly down throughout the Fix the agreement mistake
shop closures
period
, starting from more than 6,500 since
2011 to around 5,000 in 2018. The figures fluctuated with a peak at more than 7,000 in 2013, Change preposition
in
however
, after that, the number
went down and plummetted to lowest
at 800 in 2015.
The opening Correct article usage
the lowest
shops
Change to a genitive case
shop's
shops'
number
decreased from the highest at 8,500,
to less than 4,000 in the following year, but the figure climbed up to around 6,000 in 2014, reaching the same Remove the comma
apply
number
of shop closure
Fix the agreement mistake
closures
of
the year. After that, the Change preposition
in
opening
Correct quantifier usage
number of opening
shops
amount dropped again, ending at 3,000 in 2018, Change to a genitive case
shop's
shops'
although
the number
of opening stores
remained steady for 2 years during
2015 to 2017 at around 4,000.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
stores
opening and closing both dropped during the period
from 2011 to 2018, where the closing stores
were more than opening stores
in most years, except for the period
from 2014 to 2016.Submitted by wuujenna on
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