You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given pie chart
illustartes
the Correct your spelling
illustrates
propotion
of people of both genders arrested in the period 1989 to 1994, Correct your spelling
proportion
while
the bar chart indicates the most common motives of
imprisons.
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for
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of men being arrested was greater that
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than that
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of woman
woman
. Fix the agreement mistake
women
Nevertheless
, the prime reason
was the same for both genders, which was public driving.
To begin
with males, the paramount cause of arrests was public driving, accounting for more than a third. Additionally
, drink
driving made up more than a quarter of the motives. Wrong verb form
drunk
While
breach of order, assault and theft constituted approximately 16% each, 'other reason
' was a base of slightly less than 20% of arrests. Above all
, there was no answer for around 4% of imprisons.
As far women
, the prime Change preposition
as women
reason
was also
public driving, however
, it accounted for about 8% more that
for men. Correct word choice
than
Moreover
, the second most common cause was assault, which made up roughly 17%, and also
'other reason
', being almost equal to it. Despite these, theft, breach of order and drink
driving formed about a tenth each, Wrong verb form
drunk
whereas
there was no answer for more than 5% of the reasons.Submitted by gabadlugo on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reason with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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