The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph provides data about the
amount
of
money
spent on
books
in
Germany
,
France
, Italy and
Austria
between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, in all years
Germany
spent the highest
amount
of
money
on
books
. As can clearly be seen,
Initially
Germany
spent the highest
amount
of
money
on
books
(80
million
dollars
),
whereas
Austria
spent the least
amount
of
money
on
books
accounting for 30
million
dollars
. The amounts of
money
spent on
books
in Italy and
France
were pretty similar accounting for 50
million
dollars
and 55
million
dollars
respectively. From 1995 to 1997 the
amount
of
money
spent on
books
in
Germany
,
France
, Italy and
Austria
rose, after 1997 the
amount
of
money
spent on
books
in
Germany
,
France
and
Austria
continued rising,
however
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it started to decrease in Italy. In 2001
Germany
spent the highest
amount
of
money
on
books
(a little less than 80 ,
million
dollars
) and
Austria
spent the least
amount
of
money
on
books
(40
million
dollars
).
However
, There was an increase and in 2003 it overcame Italy. In 2005
Germany
spent the highest
amount
of
money
on
books
accounting for 95
million
dollars
the least
amount
of
money
spent inlay more or less 60
millions
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million
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dollars
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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