The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph provides data about the
amount
of money
spent on books
in Germany
, France
, Italy and Austria
between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, in all years Germany
spent the highest amount
of money
on books
.
As can clearly be seen, Initially
Germany
spent the highest amount
of money
on books
(80 million
dollars
), whereas
Austria
spent the least amount
of money
on books
accounting for 30 million
dollars
. The amounts of money
spent on books
in Italy and France
were pretty similar accounting for 50 million
dollars
and 55 million
dollars
respectively.
From 1995 to 1997 the amount
of money
spent on books
in Germany
, France
, Italy and Austria
rose, after 1997 the amount
of money
spent on books
in Germany
, France
and Austria
continued rising, however
it started to decrease in Italy.
In 2001 Add a comma
however,
Germany
spent the highest amount
of money
on books
(a little less than 80 ,million
dollars
) and Austria
spent the least amount
of money
on books
(40 million
dollars
). However
, There was an increase and in 2003 it overcame Italy. In 2005 Germany
spent the highest amount
of money
on books
accounting for 95 million
dollars
the least amount
of money
spent inlay more or less 60 millions
Change to singular
million
dollars
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