Dome people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some
people
think that people
who have skilled workers such
as doctor
and engineers should Fix the agreement mistake
doctors
work
in their country
, other
believe that working in another Fix the agreement mistake
others
country
should be recommended. In my opinion, this
is individual's
preference and Correct article usage
an individual's
this
essay delves into both side
with my opinion.
On the one hand, some skilled professionals, Fix the agreement mistake
sides
such
as doctors and engineers tend to work
abroad using by
their professional skills. Change preposition
apply
The one
of the main Correct article usage
One
reason
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reasons
for
why they choose to Change preposition
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work
internationally is the rate of income, which is higher than what they gained in their country
. Unfortunately, those skilled people
are the main workforce
in countries, especially in the poorer or developing states, contributing
their Correct word choice
and contributing
professionalis
skills in the Correct your spelling
professional
country
is essential for socio-economic aspects. If those workers go to
abroad to Remove the preposition
apply
work
, the country
's workforce
will be
decrease, which means arising lot of issues in the Unnecessary verb
apply
country
, such
as economic
crisis. Correct article usage
the economic
As a result
of workforce
shortage, it is required to hire qualified workers from Correct article usage
the workforce
the
abroad with high Correct article usage
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salary
. Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
For example
, in Mongolia, there is an issue of skilled Change noun form
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doctors'
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shortage, Fix the agreement mistake
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therefore
, the government required
to allocate more Add a missing verb
is required
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funds
fund
for Fix the agreement mistake
funds
this
workforce
rather than Correct article usage
the education
education
field.
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the education
On the other hand
, people
have the right to choose wherever they live and work
. People
would work
efficiently and successful
when they are happy or satisfied with their living Change the word
successfully
condition
and adequate income. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
Therefore
, the preference of living place and country
should be selective for skilled professionals. Such
as,
family members and children are the main reason Remove the comma
apply
for
why Change preposition
apply
people
prefer to work
abroad rather than stay in their country
. In my opinion, however
, their gained knowledge and work
experience cannot comparable
with anything, without Add a missing verb
be comparable
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an unadequate
unadequate
salary or living Correct your spelling
inadequate
condition
might Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
be potentially affect
to choosing in another Change the verb form
be potentially affected
country
.
To conclude
, working in their home country
where they graduated their
university is essential for Change preposition
from their
the
certain Correct article usage
a
country
's socio-economic development, conversely
, choosing to work
in
abroad is Change preposition
apply
people
's preference. Individuals have the right to selecting
where they Wrong verb form
select
work
and live, which offers sufficient salary and living condition
.Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
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