The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the numer of new shops that opened in one coutry between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,
The line chart displays a variety of emerging
shops
and the shops
that have gone bankrupt since the year
2011 until 2008.
According to
the information, various shops
have been shutting down since 2011 with its highest amount of closing in 2013, over 7000 shops
in 12 months alone. Moreover
, it reached its lowest in 2015 with less than 1000 entities. Regardless, it significantly grown
after 2015 with over 5000 entities shut down in 2018.
Moving to the opening of Wrong verb form
grew
shops
category, it started very strong with the emergence of over 8000 shops
in 2011. Nonetheless
, it did not last
long with a drastic decrease about
4000 quantities in the next Change preposition
of about
year
. In the next two years, shops
have been experiencing growth to 5000 in 2013 and 6000 in 2014. Over the next few years, it has gone down once again with just 3000 shops
opened in 2018.
Overall
, the year
2015 has marked
Add a missing verb
been marked
as
a unique Change preposition
apply
year
with both of the categories experienced
similar regression.Wrong verb form
experiencing
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