The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodations in england and wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodations in england and wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The bar chart compares changes in the
number
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of rented and owned accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, the
number
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of individuals who were owners of their properties increased,
while
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the
number
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of rented houses decreased.
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, both had the same figure in the middle of the survey. As can be seen from the bar chart,
initially
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the figure for rented houses was at the highest amount at under 80%,
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that for owned was over 20%. The former fell by 50 and stood at the lowest proportion between 1991 and 2001. In 1971, both had the same and divided into half of the figure.
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, the
number
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of owners increased until it overstriped the downward trend of rental accommodations after 1971, and reached
at
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peak of approximately 70 in 2001.
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, those who owned their property experienced a decrease by a narrow margin,
whereas
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the rent witnessed an increase, both by 5 in an inverse way.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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