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The table illustrates the projected costings during the five years in American dollars for three environmental strategies for stable forestry, whilst the pie chart presents the anticipated expenses distributed by four sectors in the first year.

The table illustrates the projected costings during the five years in American dollars for three environmental strategies for stable forestry, whilst the pie chart presents the anticipated expenses distributed by four sectors in the first year.
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The charts give information about the planned
costing
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 within the five years in American dollars for three environmental strategies for stable forestry and the anticipated spending divided by four sections in the first year.
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, it can be seen that Southeast Asia was calculated as the highest and increased over the years.
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, the majority of the money goes towards salaries.
To begin
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 with, there is more funding for Southeast Asia than for the other two continents, with 30
lot
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 in the first period. It experienced a rise of 20 to reach 50
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 in the final year. In the
begining
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, 20 million dollars were allocated for Central America, which is higher than for West Africa (10,5 million dollars). Their similarity is they keep falling to finish at 5 and 3,5 sum, each.
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, the outcomes for wages and set-up costs are the two highest, with 50% and 30%, each where the figure for salaries is the maximum record.
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, the costs intended for training and office expenses show the same proportion, which is at 10%, respectively.

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