More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?

There is no doubt that private

vehicle

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vehicles

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have been increasing especially in developing

countries

where many a person

buy

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new

cars

for the first time.

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essay will delve into some

reason

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for

this

trend and put forward some possible solutions to address

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issue.

To begin

with, the number of

cars

have

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increased in developing

countries

creates

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major

traffic

problems. several developing

coutries

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countries

have only basic transportation infrastructure which would

leads

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into

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traffic

blocks and

traffic

violations.

In contrast

, developed

countries

have

sophasticated

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sophisticated

roads and transport

mechanism

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.

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,

the

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environmental problems

is

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another major concern in those

countires

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countries

.

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,

according to

recent

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UN report , carbon emission from motorised

vehicle

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vehicles

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is one of the important

reason

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for global warming which

is mostly produces

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by these

countries

.

Nevertheless

,

There

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are some possible solutions to tackle

to

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increased

private

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number of private

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cars

in

the

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developing nations.

Firstly

, the government should initiate an action to reduce

purchase

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the purchase

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of

cars

.

In other words

, imposing heavy tax

to

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on

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the new

vehicle

would help to reduce the purchase of

cars

.

Besides

, since public transportation should be accessible and convenient for

public

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the public

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, the usage of private

vehicle

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vehicles

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may decrease.

Moreover

,

promote

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promoting

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electrical

vehicle

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vehicles

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might

preseve

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preserve

nature

as well as

the economy.

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, by promoting electrical

vehicle

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vehicles

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in India,

resuted

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resulted

in 5% carbon emissions reduction. In conclusion,

traffic

and environmental issues are the major issues in developing

countries

cause

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by

incrased

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increased

numbers of

cars

. Ergo,

the

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imposing

hevy

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heavy

tax

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taxes

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on fossil fuel

cars

and promoting electric

cars

are

the

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viable

solution

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solutions

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to tackle

this

issue. T